For the past couple of weeks, we have been making inspired writing. Here is mine.

1. The girl swam underwater
2. The girl swam under the Bluewater
3. The girl swam under the bluewater like a mermaid.      
4. A girl swam under the lake like a mermaid clutching a bright star. 
5. A wondrous girl dipped into the sparkling lake like a mermaid clutching a bright star 

 The wondrous diver Bella dipped into the sparkling blue lake like a mermaid clutching a bright start



For this, we also had to rate our self for vocab. I rate myself a four because I use words that give the reader detail and infomation.